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Fun at the Pool

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Total Drama Girls
Fun at the Pool
Written by Peter Ruksenas & Erin Delgado

(One very hot day, Peter and Sky were sitting in their living room with the fan cranked up to maximum speed)

Sky: Oh my, I can't take much more of this heat.

Peter: Me too!  I can't breathe well when it's this hot; as well as when it's bone chillin cold too.  I would easily die in this heat.

Sky: I just wish our pool didn't dry up.  Now what are we going to do?

(Just then they heard the phone ring.  Peter answered it.)

Peter: Hello?

Erin: (Voice) Hey buddy, how are you?

Peter: (Sighs) Hot... and being cooked by the heat.

Erin: (Voice) Sorry to hear.  Anyway, I was wondering if you, Sky, and our favorite girls would like to come to this nice pool with me?

Peter: Really!

Erin: Of course.  I have invited Gwen, Zoey, Emma, & Kitty and we can invite the rest.  Maybe even do some water games for fun.

Peter: Great!  We'll be right over.  (He hangs up) Get your swimsuit dear because Erin's just invited us to join him and the other girls by the pool.

Sky: Oh, thank goodness!  Just let me give Fluffy more water before we leave.

Peter: Of course.  I'll call Sammy, Carrie, Dawn, Courtney, and Bridgette.

(Once he had called his favorite girls, Peter and Sky changed into their swimsuits.  Sky made sure that their pet bunny had lots of water before they left.  30 minutes later they met everyone else at the local pool.)

Erin: Hey Peter; and ladies!  (He winks)

Sky: Hello Erin!

Gwen: Welcome to our own private pool.

Courtney: A pool just for us?  Sweet!

Erin: I know, plus a Hot Tub over there (points to the tub), a Volleyball Court, a diving area with a deep end, and also a scoreboard if we do some water games.

Bridgette: Neat!

Kitty: So, uh, what shall we do first?

Erin: Well, I was thinking a fun pool race as three girls of our choosing can swim back and forth, getting a flag as the winner and second place will be safe, and the losing girl will be tickle tortured for 5 minutes by me, Peter, and a girl of our choice.

Peter: Sounds good to me.  I pick Courtney and Bridgette.  And I bet that you want Gwen right?

Erin: Of course.

(Gwen smiled at her old friends)

Gwen: Just like old times huh?

Bridgette: Yeah, and it's nice to see you again Gwen.  Courtney loves talking about you.

Gwen: Heh, funny that we haven't got along at first until World Tour and All Stars.

Courtney: (A bit upset) Too bad you forgot about me Bridgette.

Bridgette: (Stunned) What!

Courtney: We haven't spoken to each other for years.  Do you still consider me as a friend?  I mean, you were the first and only friend I had before Gwen.

Bridgette: (As she smiled and comforts her) Of course, I am still a cool friend for you.  We just haven't spoke to each other since the first season, and we were on different teams in World Tour.

Courtney: (As she shares a hug) Thanks Bridge.

Gwen: You could've been a good teammate instead of Heather when we formed Team Amazon.

Courtney: Or on the Heroic Hamsters.

Bridgette: Heh, I would.

Gwen: So, may the best girl win this challenge?  (She offers her hands to her pals)

Bridgette/Courtney: Yeah!  (The all hold hands)

(All 3 girls walked over towards the pool and waited for the game to begin)

Peter: Ready ladies?

Girls: Ready!

Peter: And, SWIM!

(Gwen, Courtney, and Bridgette swam from one end of the pool to the other.  Gwen got her flag first, then Courtney, and finally Bridgette.  But when they got back to the starting line, all 3 of them tied.)

Gwen: What the heck?

Courtney: So, who loses?

Peter: I guess, (he and Erin smirk) ALL 3 OF YOU!

Girls: Uh oh!

Erin: (Smirks) Meaning you get to be tied up.  Emma, Kitty, Zoey, the ropes!

Zoey: On it!

Erin: (To Peter) So, how will we tickle them?  Hang them by their ankles, tickling her bellies, feet, and armpits or bound them to the chairs?

Peter: Go for the chairs.  And Erin, I think you know what to do.

Erin: Yeah!  (He turns to the girls) Girls, you are "under arrest" for being very beautiful!  (He giggles)

(Soon Emma, Kitty, and Zoey came back with the ropes and bound Gwen, Bridgette, and Courtney with their hands behind their backs and their ankles tied together and brought them to the chairs as Bridgette struggles)

Bridgette: Isn't it very uncomfortable that we're tied up?

Courtney: Not at all, only if we're tied by the people we hated, but Erin and Peter are gentle.

Gwen: (To Bridgette) At least it's not Blaineley or Chris, otherwise she would laugh at u, and use us for ratings.

Peter: True!  OK girls, time to enjoy a little torture.  Zoey, you get Gwen.  Erin, you go after Courtney.  And me, I got Bridgette.

(He, Erin, and Zoey began to tickle the girls bellies; making them all laugh hysterically.  Erin even managed to blow a raspberry on Courtney's belly.)

Courtney: (Laughing) OH NO!  STOP!  THAT'S ONLY SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN TO GWEN OR ZOEY.

Erin: (Smirks) Well Zoey has Gwen so you're free for today!

(He blew on Courtney's belly again making her laugh more.  Zoey is having fun tickling Gwen's belly and she even pokes her belly button.)

Zoey: Having fun Gwen?

Gwen: (Giggles) I am with you and my pals.

Zoey: This is very fun!

(With Peter and Bridgette, the surfer chick is laughing as Peter tickles her feet and wiggles her toes)

Bridgette: (Laughs) You're very weird sometimes, but also very funny.

Peter: Why thank you Bridgette.  I do love a cute girl with very cute and ticklish feet.

Bridgette: (Still laughing) Awe!

(They kept on tickling until their 5 minutes were up.  Soon the 3 girls were untied.)

Courtney: Phew, that was fun.  So what shall we do next?

Carrie: Maybe some Volleyball.

Erin: Good choice!  So who's playing?

Sky: I'll play, and maybe Sammy would too?

Sammy: I would love too.

Kitty: I'm in!

Carrie: Same!

Emma: I'll be scorekeeper.

Erin: Awesome!  Then it's settled.  Carrie & Kitty will be Team One and Sky & Sammy will be Team Two.

(Everyone ran to the Volleyball field; with Sky, Sammy, Carrie, and Kitty taking their respected spots)

Peter: Ready?

Girls: Ready!

Peter: (As he pulls out a coin) Heads or tails?

Sky: Heads!

Carrie: Tails!

(He flips the coin and it lands on heads)

Peter: Sky and Sammy go first.  (He hands them the ball)

Sky: (To Carrie) Ready to play?

Carrie: I am!

Emma: And go!

(Sky served but Kitty bounce the ball back)

Sammy: Oh no you don't!  (She hits the ball back)

Carrie: Here comes the big one.  (She hits the ball and Sky & Sammy miss it)

Sky: Darn!

Emma: One point for Carrie and Kitty.  They serve.

Kitty: Alright!  (She serves the ball)

Sky: Not this time.  (She slams the ball right into the ground)

Kitty: (Stunned) And here I thought I was very aggressive when it comes to playing games; even though I'm into video games more than sports.

Emma:  It's all tied up.  Whoever scores next wins.

Sammy: (As she serves) Time to eat sand!  (She hits the ball)

(Everyone spends nearly 5 minutes serving the ball until...)

Sky: You're finished!  (She slams it)

Kitty: Not this time.  (She saves it as Carrie jumps)

Carrie: Peter, get ready to torture your wife.  (She spikes it into the ground and wins the game)

Sky: Oh man!

Carrie: Yeah!

(The two RR gals hi-five each other)

Peter: Time for some tickling Sky.  You too Sammy!

Sky: (Blushes and giggles) Okay then.

(Then Erin and Peter tied Sky and Sammy to the chair and start tickling their feet as they laughed)

Peter: (Smirking) You like that my dear?

Sky: (Laughing) YES!  I ALWAYS DO!

Peter: Just wait until I untie you because I'm really going to get you good.

Sky: Oh no!  (She continues to laugh as Erin continues to tickle Sammy)

Sammy: (Laughs) THIS IS TORTURE!

Erin: Come on!  At least it's better than being stuck with Amy.

Sammy: Ha ha ha ha!  So true!  HE HE HE HE!

(Then after blowing a raspberry on Sammy's belly and tickling for a while, the boys freed the girls)

Peter: Okay then, now it's time for one more challenge and we can all have fun together!

Courtney: Sweet!

Gwen: Awesome, so what's the final challenge?

Peter: I was thinking about a sandcastle building game.  And since Zoey and Dawn haven't done anything yet, they will be the ones to compete.

Erin: Sounds good.  Ready girls?

Zoey: Of course.

Dawn: I'll do my best.

Peter: Good luck.

(The girls nod their heads as they got to the sandy area with some building kits)

Peter: Me, Erin, Carrie, and Kitty will judge your sandcastles when you are done.  And go!

(Zoey and Dawn started to build their sandcastles while everyone else got ready for some fun once the challenge was done.  30 minutes later, they were done.  Zoey made a castle that was kind of like hers and Mike's dream house while Dawn built a very detailed castle with miniature sand figures.)

Erin: Hmmm, Dawn's castle is impressive.

Carrie: And Zoey's dream house is nice.

(The others talk about it.  Who will win and lose?)

Peter: We have talked about it, and the winner is... Dawn!

(Dawn cheers)

Zoey: Of course!  Oh well, time for my punishment.  Peter, you get the feet.  Erin, you get the belly.

Peter/Erin: Sweet!

(Then the girls tied Zoey down as Erin and Peter tickled her belly and soles as Zoey laughed)

Zoey: (Laughing) This is very fun!  Ha ha ha ha ha!

Erin: (Smirks) Yep, it is.

(Then he blew a raspberry on Zoey's belly making her laugh more.  Gwen and Courtney chuckled watching their friend get tickled.)

Courtney: (To Gwen) I bet you and Erin enjoy tickling Zoey.

Gwen: We do!  (She tickles Courtney's belly) But I do love tickling you more, Miss CIT.  (She winks as Courtney laughed)

(Soon, everyone started tickling each other.  And while Erin continued to tickle Zoey, Sky pulled Peter away.)

Sky: Remember what you told me?

Peter: Ooh, I didn't forget.  (He gently tackled Sky to the ground and pinned her down before he began to tickle her real good)

Sky: (Laughing) Maybe we should find a more secluded place to do this first.

Peter: Ah let them look.

(Peter and Sky had fun with their tickle.  Later the sun started to set and everyone began to relaxing.)

Erin: (Sighs) This was a very fun day.

Gwen: (Chuckles) It sure was.  Normally I won't allow guys to tickle me.  But you're quite an exception; (she playfully poked Erin's nose) as well as Trent and Cam.

Erin: (Blushes) Thanks!  (Then Courtney tickling Erin's upper body making him laugh) He he he, Courtney Stop, Ha ha ha!

Courtney: (As she smiled) Sorry Erin, but consider this tickle payback!

Erin: (Laughs even harder) No fair!  Only I tickle you girls!

(Then he and the CIT playfully rolled around as they both fell in the pool and they began splashing each other)

Peter: (Laughing with Sky snuggled up to him as he watches them play together) I think Erin just found a new best friend.

Zoey: You said it.

(Everyone kicked back and watched the Gamer and the CIT play together in the pool as the stars came out)

(THE END)
:iconmastergamer20: and I did another roleplaying story; this time with us and our favorite TD girls playing by the pool.

Total Drama/The Ridonculous Race belongs to Fresh TV
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rocoball's avatar
I never understand the torture of the tickles, this everywhere, with all sorts of characters and series xD, but it is a good fan fic, good job, bravo :).